• Steve
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    6 months ago

    In comicbook word/thought bubbles, height in the panel always trumps laterality. It’s standard practice. You get used to it quickly.

    • VindictiveJudge@lemmy.world
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      6 months ago

      Yes, but Tuvok’s bubbles are only barely lower than Paris’ bubbles. Since there isn’t significant white space above Tuvok’s bubbles, it’s easy to read those first even when you’re used to comics, especially since they’re in the upper left corner. Move Tuvok’s bubble in the first panel to between Tuvok’s and Paris’ heads and that one gets much easier to read. Panel four would also benefit from larger text size on Paris’ line.

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        6 months ago

        I would agree.
        But that’s not what I did.
        In fact my mentioning that someone has to “get used to it” would directly acknowledge it isn’t obvious.

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          6 months ago

          Okay, rephrasing:

          If you have to insist something is unremarkable, it’s not.

          This comic is an example of someone fucking up the basics for comic dialog layout. Multiple people note that it’s ambiguous and could easily be improved. You can argue it’s reasonable. But you can’t take it for granted. Insisting on convention doesn’t mean anything when people plainly familiar with the convention say this fucked it up.

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            6 months ago

            Again, I didn’t do that either.
            I merely explained the standard convention.
            I made no comment as to this comic specifically.